Monday, 30 September 2013

MOCK ESSAY feedback

WWW

  • Decent essay 
  • Accurate writing 
  • Attempted to write both sides of the story
EBI

  • No conclution 
  • Needs to be longer 
  • More examples 
  • Dont repeat the same type of points for the different types of media 
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